Mvskoke's Comic Offtopic

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Post yer nerf'd characters here, with a physical description of 'em.

Mvskoke wrote:

I'll probably do

Shane, Kim, Kush, Nbaheen, PK, Colt, and one or both of Kim's chracters. I haven't really looked at them yet.

I can look through character pages, for physical descriptions if it's there. If so tell me. I'm probably going to draw it in the style of OOTS
http://www.giantitp.com/comics/ootscast.html

So like a body and stick figure arms and legs.
But I need skin tone hair color and hair color/style. And clothes

I'll post Shane's physical description and such; whilst the member named Kim can choose that of Kim.
As usual, I'll probably provide more information than I should.

Shane Neumann
Skin tone: White
Hair/eye colour: Brown
Hair style: Reaches his neck, sometimes part of his hair is hanging in front of his right eye
Clothing: Green vest; purple knee-length shorts, black shoes, purple socks
Race: Inhuman (doesn't know it yet)
Weapon of Choice: Sword/katana
Powers: Controls ice and lightning but doesn't know it yet, tends to discover his ice powers first and his lightning powers last. Is weak to fire.

I don't know if Super/Hyper/Raging Inhuman forms are allowed, but they'd probably be overpowered in some way, so I'll exclude them.

Kim Tyranto
Skin tone: white
Hair colour: Brown
Hair style: Long hair that reaches shoulders
Eye colour: Green
Clothing: Red top, red skirt, black silk stockings, black shoes, black gloves. Sometimes also wears a black jacket, a black silk scarf and a gas mask.
Race: Inhuman
Home: Draconia Kingdom
Class: Princess of Draconia Kingdom
Weapon of Choice: Daggers, poisoned or not
Powers: Has control over fire and poison (although she doesn't know about her poison-controlling abilities yet). She is weak to ice.

Will that do?

Thanks.

I went a head and started drawing myself
and messed around with the program for some practice.
Ill probably keep everyone human.
And dimension hopping will happen but the worlds will be my design.
I dont want to put pokemon and kingdom hearts and stuff. Or any game or television world.

I have an idea for a plot. But your free to post suggestions

Inhumans actually look similar to humans. But that's sort of unrelated, though, right?

Anyhow, will the first part be how the characters met each other?

Yea. Comic one will start with Shane,
Because the battle was his idea. So I'll do #1 with Shane getting attacked and Kim saving him. Then Kim gets in trouble and Shane uses his newly discovered ice powers to save her. Then I'll do Colt, because he's me. I'll start with him leaving his home dimension. (There's a little more backstory as I fleshed out Colts story on my own for fun.) he no longer is a magical being. Hes an archer with knife combat and throwing skills who teleports and turns invisible. He's a rogue pretty much. Then I'll do The others somehow in a way I haven yet thought of.

I haven't decided if I want it to be funny or action-y probably more action

Why not try to combine it sometimes? Remember, Shane takes everything literally, and he has 29 fears. It's basically hard *not* to avoid funniness with Shane around.

Mvskoke wrote:

one or both of Kim's chracters. I haven't really looked at them yet.

Well, you can choose which of my characters you want to use. They all have their outfits already described, and their skin colour is the same as your avatar's skin colour. If you need more details, feel free to ask~
If you want them to be nerf'd, feel free to nerf them like you wish to. As long as they control something.

If you choose to use the pixie character of mine, in the comic could her wings be fake wings instead of real ones, please?

Yea sure, why fake though

If I had to guess why Kim'd want the pixie wings to be fake,

Mvskoke wrote:

Ill probably keep everyone human.

That's just my guess though.

Oh, right. But People can still fly

People! Post a nerf'd version.
I need Kush and PK. And Nbaheen. But he hasn't responded to anything yet. He may not make the comic, or may be ablate arrival

KUSHAGRA AND KARJAMP! POST YOUR NERF'D VERSIONS OF YOUR CHARACTERS RIGHT NOW OR ELSE YOU'LL BE GROUNDED!



Dunno about nbaheen, though, but he's been just as inactive at the LFE Forums. I'm guessing it's school that's keeping him inactive, if not Internet connection problems like sometime last year.

As for Bla bla bla 44, he doesn't have Battle characters here, and he left the Battle for several reasons. One of them being the monster posts, I think.

Kushagra Jain
Skin tone: Light Peach
Hair color: Red
Eye color: Brown
Hair style: Medium length, comes to bottom of eyes, smooth in the back
Clothing: White Blouse, Red Sleeveless Jacket with 2 white Jewels, Black Jeans, Red and whit sneakers
Race: 5th Elemental
Weapon of Choice: Fifuso Eremento(Main) Elemental Swords
Powers: 5th Element Powers, Element absorbing, Elemental Sword Creation, Psychic Powers, Mimicry Powers, Mind Reading, Meditation Power Storage
Transformations: True 5th Elemental, Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Ying and Yang (Main) Every other Element (Not main)
Weaknesses:
-His True 5th Elemental can destroy ANYTHING, and he never used it
-He is weak to Light and Dark, even though his Ying and Yang forms are the of the same elements.

What does 5th elemental powers entail?

Mvskoke wrote:

What does 5th elemental powers entail?

What do you mean?

I mean a fire elementlist can make fireballs and stuff

Quote :

...the 5th element is quintessence / ether, which apparently is the fifth and highest element after air and earth and fire and water; apparently it was believed to be the substance composing all heavenly bodies. The ancient philosophers believed that everything consisted of four elements: fire, water, earth and air, and apparently there's a fifth element...

It is basically pure energy. Nothing else. I wish I could read my brain out.

All right I can do that I guess.

And I need a nerf'd PK

kushagrajaink wrote:

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I like how you did that

Anyway, are there going to be any formal events in the comic, Mvskoke?
If so, could my avatar's outfit be Kim's alt outfit for formal events?

Also, I hope you don't mind if I call you Emvis :3

Most people just say Mvs instead. To be honest it does kind of bother me because my username isn't actually meaningless letters.

Mvskoke is the name of my indian tribe. It's the tribe commonly known as Creek. But the native name for our tribe, is Muscogee. But the Muscogee native language lacks some of the letters to spell Muscogee. So the native spelling of the native name is Mvskoke. The V makes a 'u' sound and the Ks are a c and a g.

So it kinda bothers me a bit.

I dont know if there will be any formal events. I don't have much planned beyond a couple strips. If there are formal events sure.


Also If I do make it funny (as funny as I can anyways) I'm going to make everyone dysfunctional

Also I nerf'd Pk and sent KarjamP a message as to what he thinks about him.
And I finished drawing Colt and Kush

Hope you weren't expecting too much guys.
Anyways I finished everyone and put them in a basic pose here



The glow around there hands (and Shane's sword) is magic.

If anyone wants something changed then let me know. Otherwise I'm gonna start comic'in

My attacks are white, not yellow. Also, add the white jewel on the other side of the jacket. Remove the lines on the top and bottom of the jewel and you are done. Also, even though I forgot to mention, there is a white orb on his forehead. Other than that, perfect. Rock and roll!

Mvskoke wrote:

Hope you weren't expecting too much guys.
Anyways I finished everyone and put them in a basic pose here



The glow around there hands (and Shane's sword) is magic.

If anyone wants something changed then let me know. Otherwise I'm gonna start comic'in

It. Looks. AWESOME!

This is entirely optional, but...
Could you perhaps coat Kim's dagger in poison?

Yea sure, glad you like it.

Ill fix both requests

I use swords with one hand, not two...

Other than that, it looks good...

I hope it's not to overly simplistic, but they'll be smaller in the comic.
And it's easier to make them faster if they're easier to draw
And I dont want the art to take away from the comic

That last reason was bull, it's just so much easier to draw like that.
Although Inkscape is really hard to use
Finished all the changes you wanted, I'm going to add a non-white background to it, probably just brick wall, or something (suggestions?) Anyways I'm working on the one where shane gets jumped but then kim saves him and stuff

Perhaps you may not want to overlap them like the previous one. Just makes it easier to see our characters. Also, you can make the backgrounds somewhat related to the characters. But the background is up to you.

I'll go with Mvskoke's version of PK:

Can only copy people who he watched, as well as use arm canons and missile launchers (shifts his arms, of course).

Also, he made him more dysfunctional: a know-it-all who comes up with crazy plans.

Yea I never mentioned that, I may m ake them dysfunctionnal for comedic effect

Unless you guys dont want me to

I don't really care how you portray my characters.

He's not the canon version, so...

(While I AM going to release him under a similar license to Jenny Everywhere, I'm also going to make a canon PK for use as a guideline in case anyone wants to use it as a basis for their portrayals).

I've got good news bad news, and more good news.

The good news is that my first comic is out in all it's glory, (nothing special just introduces Shane, and sets the scene for Kim) so read it and marvel, ye mortals.

The bad news is that I lost all of my stuff due to corrupt files. Except comic number one which was on a flash drive. So I have o redraw all the characters.

The other good news is that the above paragraph is a blatant lie.

I'm also repurposing this thread. So post all your stuff pertaining to my comic here. Thread, I rechristian thee, Comic offtopic! (Shane can you rename this thread for me? thanks) So tell me how cool I am and how great the comic is here. If you want to complain about the comic, then you can eat a bowl of rusty nails. Without any milk.

So Comic #1 will post later today, when I get to a computer. (On an iPod now)
Any ideas for a name??

Renamed.

How about "The Battle Comic"?
(That's a name that probably sounds lame though)

I was thinking The Battlers or something, but I think it could be better

Like Uber Awesome Adventure Land
Or something better

Hmmm...

The Battle of Awesomeness?
Amazing Battle of Destiny?
Life as an Awesome Battler?

La Bataille?

Pugna?

La Battaglia?

La Batalla?

I'm gonna go with

Amazing Battle of Awesomeness

Also Comic 1 is out

It. Looks. Awesome!


@Shane: the or :<3: smileys don't work.

I appreciate it, but I know it's not great.

Hopefully I'll get better as it goes along

Theres a new comic out now.

It's amazing~ ♥ <3

Thanks Taylor!
I reuploaded it due to the initial upload sucking

It's good!


Shane approved: +5

Oh, you're a cunning one, Shane.

Anyway, we can expect comic #3 in April, right?

It may be in. march. Comic three is short. Its just going to set them scene for comic 4

All right I said it'll be up by the end of March.

I lied.
We are being screwed by our internet peeps.
Ill continue to write. But posting may be hard. And updates may be scarce during this time. I apologize for the delay. However my fantasy story will still be updated. I can write that on my phone. But I have to restart the chapter Im on so the update will not be as soon as hoped

Dude. That was. GREAT!

Your Forum Reputation is now 21 points as of after reading that chapter. I feel sorry for Shane, though.
As I always do.

For some reason, I imagine a portal swallowing Colt and letting him appear above Shane in the sky, falling on top of Shane. But that's just my vivid imagination going wild~

It involves portals
If you feel sorry for Shane I can let Kush fall on top of Kim

I'll be light though.... Because Kush is only 29.5 KG!

So who's darkness, then?